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Success
Contributed by
dark_poet
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Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 07:18:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im suppose to be a family man, sort of
like a nonprofit group, when i am needed
but lately Im feeling like an entertainer
trying to juggle two jobs and college for the family sake
the struggle was, keeping my headup, when the audience was watching
persuing towards education, building up my knowledge
the failures that arose, peaple are booing
my only option now was the backdoor, im leaving
my efforts are like machines at the casinos
placing all my energy into the slots, hoping for success
pulling the handle and it was truly wasted
if only i had succeeded, now im feeling weary
not much was gained everything I did was in vain
my story continues on, this is just the beginning
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2007-11-25 07:18:00]
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Re: Success
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 09:55:17 AM AEST
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Nice poem..
Happy Holidays |
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Re: Success
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 10:27:32 AM AEST
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Great writing.
Sometimes when we take two steps forward we fall back three.
Still the good times makes it all worth it.
Hang tuff, my freind 'cause joy cometh in the morning.
Huggs,
emy |
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