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Daddy's Little Girl
Contributed by
pixie
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Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 04:04:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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Oh Dad, I just don’t want to believe,
Over your death I can not grieve,
I still expect you to walk in the door,
The thought that you won’t chills my inner core.
I can’t let go of things from the past,
The hurtful memories are the ones that last,
I wish I could see your smiling face,
But the painful thoughts are so hard to erase.
I keep my grief deep inside,
I feel like a chunk of my heart has died,
It went away the day you left,
At that final moment you drew life’s last breath.
They say time can only heal,
But how do they know, or begin to feel?
A hurt so bad that it destroys you from within,
Dad when they took you they committed such sin.
It hurts to try and remember,
The pain is colder than December,
There’s a void now present in my world,
Because I was my daddy’s little girl.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2007-11-25 04:04:34]
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by Crow on
Sunday, 25th November 2007 @ 05:08:59 AM AEST
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Pixie.. what an Honorable write, and very touching" to my heart, I have little girls..
Daddy`s and little girls...un-breakable bond.
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by soulsearching43 on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 10:05:13 AM AEST
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you really touched my heart with this one i actually cried i recently lost my dad very unexpected and i still cant get past it
if one more person tells me time will heal i think i will scream i loved my dad and i to was a daddy's little girl and will be forever
great poem
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 08:30:35 PM AEST
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Gone but never forgotten, that is crystal clear in the warmth of your write here.You will always be his little girl, I'm sure he is still looking down on you and smiling
Steve |
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Re: Daddy's Little Girl
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by ratty on
Friday, 30th May 2008 @ 01:10:06 PM AEST
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| Very nice written........When they say time can only heal, they lie, time don´t excist....... |
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