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Walk on Water
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 09:42:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I cannot peer inside your head, though I'm expected to
My vision, though clear,will not break unspoken thoughts
When I stare into the mirror, I see nothing but myself
Mere mortal, perfect in imperfection and happy to be so
If you were to cut me, surely I will bleed
Of the same flesh as you, I am made to be broken
The expectations that you have, would Hercules be strong ?
Remember man is only man, so how can I be more ?
Should I gain wings to fly, you would insist I soar higher
Could I run like the wind, I would need to be swifter
Redundant devil here you'll find,for never idle hands
Sleep the only hideaway to free the shackled mind
Look to yourself before you cast the first stone
You are my reflection, I no more than yours
Tomorrow when I greet you, do not look for any miracle
Until you can teach me how to walk on water.
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Re: Walk on Water
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by Honey56 on
Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 11:04:32 AM AEST
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This is very good..Well written and coming of true words spoken..
You have abundant talent..
Happy Holidays To You & Yours..
Blessings..
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Re: Walk on Water
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 06:54:59 AM AEST
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Tomorrow when I greet you, do not look for any miracle
Until you can teach me how to walk on water.
Awesome work here.
The above two lines cracked me up.
huggs, smiles,
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