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My Wave Upon Your Shore
Contributed by
wordpoet
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Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 02:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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If my passion were a tidal wave, to crash upon your shore,
My waters would engulf you and make your spirits soar.
With longing I would take you into my waiting arms,
While fingers touch and lips caress, your unresisting charms,
Sweet kisses to seduce you, in places warm and sweet,
I’d lay you down, skin to skin, upon the velvet sheet,
Caressing all the places that make your juices flow,
I’d bring you to an ecstasy, my desire now would show.
By tracing slowly with my tongue your salty bolsons skin,
Our bodies will become as one and be pleasured by our sin.
Then parting petals with my stem, a climax will be reached,
As the raptured realms that lie within finally are breached.
My heart will keep on racing as my wave it leaves your shore,
And I know that I will long for you, now and evermore.
Blissfully I’ll lay with you, my destiny made clear,
As whispers born in passion will be placed within your ear.
By: Doug Morton
http://wordpoet.tripod.com
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 09:43:52 AM AEST
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WWEW Doug things got a little warm in here!
Very vivid & romanticly done,nice job! Christina |
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 12:08:02 PM AEST
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Very hot and steamy indeed good grief...
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by MoonlitAngel on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 03:46:35 PM AEST
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Wow... I had some dirty thoughts when I saw the title, but I didn't think it would actually be dirty!! lol
Great write! ;)
~ Moonlit Angel
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 09:57:00 PM AEST
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| ahhh beautiful, *sigh* |
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by Lia on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 10:12:02 PM AEST
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| I feel I should wash my eyes out with soap after reading this LMAO!! This is definately hot, steamy and full of passion. Love it! |
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by DreamWeaver on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 10:22:39 PM AEST
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| Loving, sensuous and erotic ... mmmm very nice indeed Doug. |
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by roisin on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 04:26:34 AM AEST
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mmmm...a warm aphrodisiac quality to this one...a gorgeous write....
ta
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by wordsy on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 09:13:22 AM AEST
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A well worded weaving.
wordsy. |
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 11th March 2003 @ 01:15:06 PM AEST
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| Yeow Doug!!! All I can say is YEEEEEOOWW. Hot and tender at the same time.....perfect rhyme and rhythm. Wish I had written it...lol Great write my friend :o) |
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Re: My Wave Upon Your Shore
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 02:26:37 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful!! i never knew something so erotic and steamy could be so soft and lovely at the same time. this write shall appeal to men and women alike!
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