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Marble
Contributed by
crow
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Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 04:45:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Its been some time..
left You alone to wander.
That Ocean crashes the shore.
Greenery and painted bush
laden with scents, sweetened
with sounds of Finch, and generation.
Swabs We borrow
without thought at times,
beauty, and just living.. "marble
everyone.
One more thing..
before this falls to a past.
I must un-bury your heart..to remember mine. Vincent
Copyright ©
crow
... [
2007-11-23 16:45:26]
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Re: Marble
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by shelby on
Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 05:02:49 PM AEST
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Second stanza made me feel I was there.
I am glad you "HID" and got this done lol...
Hugs
Michelle
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Re: Marble
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by emystar on
Friday, 23rd November 2007 @ 05:06:53 PM AEST
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Good write, my friend.
big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Marble
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by TheGrimReapersHourglass on
Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 05:07:19 AM AEST
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| As The Ocean I Am The Reaper,Feel The Reaper,The Reaper!,The Reaper!,as for Vincent- Blow Me A Kiss, Ball Of Hate,Its Such A Brutal Planet Its Such A Living Hell,Piece Of Cake,Hourglasses yet to come,swabs left behind unknown reasons???People Are Strange When Your A Stranger People Seem Ugly When Your Alone,My Generation for us as even Cobain Come As You Are As You Were As I Want You To Be we&Even In His Youth He Was Nothing, Nothing,marble-sWalk This Way &This Ball Of Hate,Thank You from The Grim Reaper,DevilsPriest KnownAs LORD,Denver L. |
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Re: Marble
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by brew on
Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 06:09:05 AM AEST
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WOW.......what a heart filled write. Was beautiful
brew~ |
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