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Freedom
Contributed by
Bizzy
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Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 01:40:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Today
I will do what I want to do!
I'll not feel guilty for saying "No" to you!
I may sit, read, or play any time
I choose;
The Great King Jesus has paid my dues.
I know what I do is a worthwhile work,
though some will say that my duties,
I shirk;
I don't need today your wise approval
for its God's test alone some day will prove all.
Its not selfish of me to think of myself,
to behave in a manner thats good for my health.
Some work is healthy for my self-respect
and good, clean fun brings no regret.
I refuse to live in your obligation,
falling always short of your expectaion.
What I do for you is a gift from me...
Just 'cause I love you, don't you see?
Can you let me do what I want to do?
Freedom now!... if you love me, too!
If you aren't ready,...
I'll love you still;
But I'm going anyway;...
its the Father's will.
G.F.R. Coykendall, May 23, 1989
Copyright ©
Bizzy
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2003-03-07 01:40:00]
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Re: Freedom
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by PhantomsLDY on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 02:13:47 AM AEST
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| Great we all have the right to have just a little freedom sometimes without others trying to tell us we shouldn't |
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Re: Freedom
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by Bizzy on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 07:17:01 AM AEST
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| Thanks for affirming my thoughts which I expressed in Freedom. Bless you with a happy day, LJ. Bizzy |
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Re: Freedom
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by fancyface4898 on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 09:06:23 AM AEST
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| very nicely written |
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Re: Freedom
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by Bizzy on
Friday, 14th March 2003 @ 06:27:29 PM AEST
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Hello, fancyface! Thank you for the read and comment. Will be looking for your poetry.
Bizzy 'Clean is beautiful!' |
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