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CONFLICTED MIND
Contributed by
gribbs
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Wednesday, 21st November 2007 @ 05:09:43 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Together forever
Forever striving
Striving for what
What can replace comfort
Comfort, the ultimate in life
Life carrying on
On to what might be
Be fortunate
Fortune, the ultimate treasure in a simple man’s mind
Mind, the killer of a great many men
Men of the world, who hold faith in what they believe
Belief, the religion of a great many minds
Mind, a conflicted sphere, always trying to make a commitment to the ultimate sacrifice
Sacrifice, man’s gift through millennia
Millennia, the next voyage where man is headed
Headed for doom, for he knows not what life truly is
Keith W. Saunders
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2007-11-21 05:09:43]
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Re: CONFLICTED MIND
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by wretched_reflections on
Wednesday, 21st November 2007 @ 12:17:39 PM AEST
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| Deep.. really good. |
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Re: CONFLICTED MIND
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by Rescue on
Thursday, 22nd November 2007 @ 01:29:34 AM AEST
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| A poem worth reading several times! |
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