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Remembering I'm me

Contributed by danhar07 on Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 07:01:34 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

If you've got nothing else
nothing to see
no reason to breathe
why not let it be
fall asleep
where you can scream
in the same old dream
a memorie
dead to me
but still in deep
all that was now couldn't have seen
with no exit you crawl
from each fall back into
the unknow made choice you didn't make
for yourself it was someone else
that dealt the pain
gave you the most cause you wouldn't refuse
left you to lose
and turn and never face the world
that always seems to pull the knife all the way throught
the heart that's cold and numb from the constant mistakes
knowing there's no such thing as love
when it changes into the hate that you hold alone
when you take the blame
under the name of shame
it's hard at times to not get lost
when everytime you turn around your heat stops
and you think this is it my last day
so you write out everything you held onto finaly showing
the world your true self
the person they all made
but kept away
pushing untill you break
the line which shouldn't be crossed
but every one stands on
and waits untill your hate
builds up the fear to ever feel love inside
the shell that is filled with your own emptiness
because you felt the same before
and never knew what to do
when you gave everything a man can
and left with your own blood on your hands
used and abused your life seems over now
you lay alone with the memorie pulling you down
looking out the window you find nothing in the reflection
of the person who looks back
who's got nothing else
no reason to breathe
so you fall again remembering I'm me...

Copyright © danhar07 ... [ 2007-11-20 07:01:34]
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Re: Remembering I'm me (User Rating: 1 )
by classicfailedhero on Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 09:28:08 AM AEST
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nice write

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