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ANOTHER DAY (The Conflicted Mind)
Contributed by
gribbs
on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 04:28:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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The agony of living each day
Consumes much energy
To write without depression
Takes all my will
I stop from slipping into the abyss
To be the person, most see me as
A charade
Yet to escape that life, scares me
Although I’m secure where I stand
Understanding the insecurities of most, has given me a gift,
I’m not sure I want
Still, with it comes knowledge,
Which no one sees
The torture I live each day
The struggle becomes unbearable at times
A voice urging me to indulge in the final act
Yet strength comes from within
With knowledge I am my own savior
Keith W. Saunders
Copyright ©
gribbs
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2007-11-20 04:28:09]
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Re: ANOTHER DAY (The Conflicted Mind)
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by Honey56 on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 04:46:59 AM AEST
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A beautiful peace of work here.
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Re: ANOTHER DAY (The Conflicted Mind)
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by tifrob on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 12:08:21 PM AEST
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This was hard to read. I actually felt like "the abyss" was real and that you have the ability to take someone with you. That's scary. At the same time, that what makes this an excellant piece of work.
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Re: ANOTHER DAY (The Conflicted Mind)
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by brew on
Monday, 26th November 2007 @ 08:56:02 AM AEST
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Hm confused, yet not?!?! Not a good things always, but ho knows, could bring ones self, to doing and following all the right things, with out destroying, others.! Deep write...hit home
brew~ aka dayna |
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