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Why do we fight
Contributed by
Voice of the Silent
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Monday, 19th November 2007 @ 10:43:26 AM in AEST
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Why do we fight
It isn't right
Its so senseless fighting day and night
Why fight day and night
it just isn't right
we could all just solve it by talking it out
There''s never the need to go through these bouts
This fighting is just roting our world
And if it would stop we would all come around
We'd be in a better place if we all could find so fairground
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Voice of the Silent
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2007-11-19 10:43:26]
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Re: Why do we fight
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by simonedontplay on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 01:02:59 AM AEST
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| i thought it was short an sweet, but avid being too cliche an too rhyme rhyme. overall great poem, good message |
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Re: Why do we fight
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by simonedontplay on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 01:03:04 AM AEST
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| i thought it was short an sweet, but avid being too cliche an too rhyme rhyme. overall great poem, good message |
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