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THE INVISIBLE
Contributed by
kristinamarie68
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Sunday, 18th November 2007 @ 03:42:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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I am the invisible, I am overlooked
I am standing here right next to you, you didnt even look
I am the invisible, I am the haunted
I am cowering deep inside of me, so tired of being taunted
I am the invisible, I am NOT okay
I am waving goodbye to you as you walk away
I am the invisible, am I alive or dead?
I used a knife to cut myself, to my dismay I bled...
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2007-11-18 15:42:35]
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Re: THE INVISIBLE
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 18th November 2007 @ 07:43:48 PM AEST
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If you bleed it means you are human.........and to be human means you are capable of showing emotion.
You did that here
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Re: THE INVISIBLE
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by Forgotten_soul on
Tuesday, 20th November 2007 @ 01:04:14 AM AEST
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If I wren't at school reading this, I'd add it to my bookmarks. It has a very real point of view.
The ending really stunned me, I just didn't expect it to be so frighteningly close to my own world.
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