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No One there
Contributed by
ox-ashley-ox
on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 03:31:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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All the pieces fall to the ground
Shattering without a sound
Feeling like you have no hope
And no one there to hold you
How can someone be so heartless?
Trying to clear your mind
One battle at the time
Sitting and watching the silent night
Trembling without a fight
Finally giving up
With no one there to hold you
Pushing yourself over the edge
Darkness appears..
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2007-11-17 15:31:17] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: No One there
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 04:15:37 PM AEST (User
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I know that feeling well.
This write is sad but well written.
Hang tuff.
Hope you feel better really soon.
I'll pray for you.
huggs, prayer,
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