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Alive
Contributed by
SugarCoatedSweetness
on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 09:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I'm Feeling So Unreal
Like I'm Not Really Here
I'm Nowhere
I'm An Illusion
Ever Day It's All The Same
Same Stuff Different Day
I Need Something Different
Something To Make Me Feel Alive
Like A Trill
Some Exvcitment
Anything That Can Make Me Feel Alive
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2003-03-06 21:20:00]
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Re: Alive
(User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 11:04:52 PM AEST
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Hey I'm right behind you there! Me Too!
Good write! Christina |
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Re: Alive
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by Bizzy on
Tuesday, 25th March 2003 @ 11:50:39 AM AEST
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| Dear Sugarcoated, Other than two little typos or misspellings (thrill, excitement), this is a very good piece. Its brief and right to the point which is usually the best way to get a message across. Hope to read you again soon. Bizzy 'Clean is beautiful!' |
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