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The best seem to leave
Contributed by
the_unknown
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Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 05:13:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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Its those nights you realize youre all alone
Youre thinking to yourself, "I bet no one has every felt this bad before."
Youre lying there, almost lifeless
Thinking of all the people who broke your heart
Crushed your dreams
Left you behind
Forgot about you
And stabbed you in the back
Oh how kind some people are, pretending they care
Well, maybe a few
Really do
But everyone who ever meant anything
Always seem to leave
Copyright ©
the_unknown
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2007-11-16 17:13:06]
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Re: The best seem to leave
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by madhusudan on
Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 11:25:10 PM AEST
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| I might not agree with your ending...but its poetry and each one is bound by his perceptions...overall very moving and a thinking poetry... |
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Re: The best seem to leave
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by BornReckless on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 06:26:59 AM AEST
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the ones who truly care and will never leave, are few are far in between, they are a rare species, but anyway i liked your poem.
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Re: The best seem to leave
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by meadcomposition on
Wednesday, 21st November 2007 @ 02:11:04 AM AEST
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I've felt this way many a time.
Keep it up. |
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Re: The best seem to leave
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by musicXisXlife on
Friday, 4th January 2008 @ 04:23:02 PM AEST
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| Sigh. I like the first stanza especially. But this is depressing. :( I won't leave you my dear. |
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