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Almost gone

Contributed by danhar07 on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 03:48:12 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



There is no forgiveness
I live this
myself hate made
with the loss of you
Never could have been good enought
always fell the same
an every one's sorry but
I'm to blame for all that's over now
I can't breathe with my head under the water
drown me out
Your feel hurt too
when there's nothing left
for you too abuse
Your sorry
I know
soon your become back to the old you
always faking with every smile
BUt not this time NO
it's over an You can let me drown
LOst it all
Myself hate realize it's you who gave me
this pain inside my heart
every time I missed you
every time I told you I couldn't feel this again about any one else
CAn't rest can't beleave this is me
Nothing wanted in the end so undead
Take maybe my last breath
looking for a way to find a place to hide this shame
Never faking why
I have no reason to explain
let my self wash away
end this sickness that never helps
this demon killing me
Nothing you can see
it's under the skin a part to deep to view
beside the point
this my own hell
an every thought dosn't help
my minds tired of every line of lies
that your memories alway remind
my heart to bleed
knowing that there's nothing left
only a brokon heart in my head
alone in hell
no one can hear me screaming
no one can see in deep
see the breaking dream
when there's no air to breathe
when There is no forgiveness
I Remember I live this
Don't know what to think
I just let go of everything
now I feel pushed out
just lost
what's been killing me most
Lay me down
burry me some where deep
Let me rest
Because I never get to sleep
Your the only thought
I wish I couldn't keep
Your the only one
that makes me
wish I wasn't me
so lay me down and let me be....

If you could only see
the pain inside of my soul you gave
then maybe you wouldn't be
so happy to make me bleed
YOu must want too
hold down and kill my trust
With every word you speak
I fall farther in too deep
Broken heart and dreams
all thats left of me it seems
let go of my every thing
Don't know what to think
I felt my heart brake an shatter like a glass dream
lost every reason
an not hearing what i need
brokon hopes what I wish i wasn't
but it's become just constant fear
Reflecting the ugly that I see in me
ya you made it clear
what you think i am
now I feel pushed out
just lost
what's been killing me most
the qustion is gone but
the answer was no
fill the shallow hole
so alone to be only nume
but it's been hurting for so long
no one see's me holding on
when I'm almost gone





Copyright © danhar07 ... [ 2007-11-16 15:48:12]
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Re: Almost gone (User Rating: 1 )
by madhusudan on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 11:22:42 PM AEST
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I will be honest...this doesnt make for great poetry...but it does have a very emotional read...I hope you can get out of this mess...
do take care




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