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Falling
Contributed by
xxmonstahxx
on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 08:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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The moment I felt
your lips touch mine
I fell for you
The second I felt
your hand grasp mine
Faster I began descending
The minute I felt
your body against mine
I hit the bottom hard
When we became one
I knew
I was in love with you
Copyright ©
xxmonstahxx
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2003-03-06 20:20:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Falling
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 07:58:43 PM AEST (User
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this is sooo beautiful, and because it is lost love it moves with even greater inpact; your poetry a soft breath of vivid life....... hugs n' love nessa |
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