|
Menu
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
A mornings word 111307
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 11:58:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
|
Efforts made in ernest
are left in wanting still
by those who ask and are unanswered
by the thoughts of how they feel
A pondered pause is taken
upon thoughts a bit absurd
As answers are sought in silence
to questions still unheard
While random truths are often found
by those it is who seek
and dare to tempt a favor of fate
to try and take a peek
Copyright ©
wordsy
... [
2007-11-13 23:58:23] (Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment. That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A mornings word 111307
(User Rating: 1 ) by law_glen18 on
Wednesday, 14th November 2007 @ 12:02:55 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Brilliant and artistic write as always wordsy!!! |
|
|
Re: A mornings word 111307
(User Rating: 1 ) by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 14th November 2007 @ 12:46:30 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Poetic write my friend, wonderful flow. Brevity of words with much meaning...thanks for sharing.
Peace,
Laura |
|
|
Re: A mornings word 111307
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 15th November 2007 @ 04:01:37 AM AEST (User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
well, wordsy, my friend, there is a moral inside these lines ..
(as often is found within your words)
Excellent presentation of thought and art. Seek and ye shall find, right?
=)
~Breezy |
|
|
|