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Now Comes Tomorrow’s Memories
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 05:44:41 PM in AEST
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Now Comes Tomorrow’s Memories
I have…
recollections
of a future, from a past
that somehow I can
simply not recall;
but you were there,
as you are now.
I have…
scars upon
my person, I am certain
belong to someone else;
though now I offer
them to you,
as I did then.
I have…
an awareness
of your body, some innate
recognition;
which belies the fact
that we have
only met.
I have…
impressions
of your touch,
as if I had been birthed;
brought into this world,
with your hand
upon my soul.
I have…
certain inhibitions
that speak softly now
in volumes;
screaming whispers,
that request of me,
this time, let’s get it right.
I have…
premonitions
of a yesterday-tomorrow
wherein there were
star-crossed lovers
who, somehow
failed to meet.
I have…
recollections
of a future, from a past
that somehow I can
simply not recall;
but we are here,
and this…
is now.
~ Nazmythian ~
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Nazmythian
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Re: Now Comes Tomorrow’s Memories
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 06:51:10 PM AEST
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wow Nazzzy lol this is darn good write .
I have…
premonitions
of a yesterday-tomorrow
wherein there were
star-crossed lovers
who, somehow
failed to meet
love those lines
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Re: Now Comes Tomorrow’s Memories
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 07:44:55 PM AEST
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Hey Nazzy,
this is a very deep creative, touching write.
big huggs,
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Re: Now Comes Tomorrow’s Memories
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 14th November 2007 @ 03:14:31 AM AEST
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Naz...wow, this was beautiful and so deep in it's being. The "I have" beginnings to each stanza bring attention to the words. Great write.
Peace,
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Re: Now Comes Tomorrow’s Memories
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by Wachumiri on
Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 06:29:17 AM AEST
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"I have…
impressions
of your touch,
as if I had been birthed;
brought into this world,
with your hand
upon my soul."
That was amazing. The whole poem was, but that caught me. I really liked how you conveyed a feeling of... necessity, I don't know, desire to hold on. Well written, and very poetic.
Take care,
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Re: Now Comes Tomorrow’s Memories
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by Spike on
Wednesday, 12th December 2007 @ 10:30:11 PM AEST
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whoowhoo! save this one for that magical night of chance meetings, or when you come home really late to an irate partner.
(better learn it off by heart)
awesome, dude.
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Re: Now Comes Tomorrow’s Memories
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by zenith66 on
Saturday, 5th January 2008 @ 05:36:01 PM AEST
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purely breathtaking my freind, sends me reeling into an intracate world of dreams and maybes, this is great poetry, such mystery and so many touching lines
(loved the 4th verse) to stop and relish,
another fabulous and not overly complicated piece of writing,
brilliant!!!
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