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It's No Secret
Contributed by
gabby521
on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 08:32:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love the way you smile at me,
And still have so much to say.
After all this time I can't believe
That I still feel this way.
And "all this time" is still not enough,
How I'm dying to be with you now.
It's no secret that this world is rough,
And you get me through it somehow.
By loving me the way you do,
And keeping my spirits high;
By giving me reason to love you too,
And loving all the ways that I try;
By letting me be all I can be for you.
To be everything is all I desire.
You're my everything, and you know it's true -
What we have, babe could walk us through fire.
Copyright ©
gabby521
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2007-11-13 08:32:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: It's No Secret
(User Rating: 1 ) by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 09:57:04 AM AEST (User
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this is a very sweet and enlightening expression of love here.. you did a good job for your first write. maybe if you keep trying to write you will grow in writing.. just keep writing.. you get better as time goes on. awesome job in expression here
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Re: It's No Secret
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dagman on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 07:31:51 AM AEST (User
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good poem, like it... |
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