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Vamp In The Night
Contributed by
black-reaper
on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 04:09:51 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Vamp In The Night
He roamed the streets in search of his prey
Some innocent young victim of which to sway
A vamp in the night, he needed his thrill
To embark his charms before the chill
The surprise was on him for she had spied him first
As she walked down the street adorned in black skirt
The lust shown in his eyes as he openly admired
Each of her curves freely showing by lack of attire.
Her ruby red lips promised passion this night
As her eyes held his dancing with delight
He sensed something about her,what could it be he thought
Then she smiled at him and answered while eyes still locked.
Too late for him for she was much stronger than he
Not only a vamp but also a witch was she
He had met his match, but much more too
As he looked deep in her eyes that were cobalt blue.
The rest of the night was like a blur
She had definitely bewitched him, he had to concur
They were now bound together from their first bite
Through eternity with passion they shall unite.
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black-reaper
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2007-11-13 04:09:51]
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Re: Vamp In The Night
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 07:10:19 AM AEST
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BLack i love this write heh.
its awsome
Keep on penning
love ya hugs
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Re: Vamp In The Night
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 09:58:53 AM AEST
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a very wonderous dark write.. i really liked the stanzas in this.. i can't really pick which one i like best.. very dark!! beautiful write
rock on,
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Re: Vamp In The Night
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by DannyC on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 10:02:17 AM AEST
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Dark, and yet beautiful.
Good job. |
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Re: Vamp In The Night
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by shelby on
Saturday, 15th December 2007 @ 10:23:52 AM AEST
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Damn she must be my twin sister ROFLMAO..
ok now I will be serious here.....
the entire write flowed and did so with spice and excitement..
ten points and vampire whispers at ya for this one
Michelle |
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