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LOVE LIVES
Contributed by
curtisc
on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 09:12:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I always wondered if you still thought of me,
because I always thought of you.
I always wondered what we could be,
with a love so strong and true.
It's still there after all these years,
burning bright, deep inside.
It has survived many heartbroken tears,
and stayed with me stride for stride.
I never let go of my first love,
and I'm so glad that girl was you.
Sweetheart you're my turtle dove,
now I think it's time we flew.
In these years that you've been away,
I've had an empty space in my heart.
This time you're not getting away,
never again will we be apart.
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2007-11-12 21:12:53] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: LOVE LIVES
(User Rating: 1 ) by O7NeVeS on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 08:32:29 PM AEST (User
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UGH! I totally just threw up in my mouth!!! WTF?! All this lovey dovey stuff; GROSS!!! LoL Just playin Hun!! It was an amazing write! I know how long you've waited for this day, and how much she means to you... I'm SOOOO glad she's in your life, and that you're happy. You totally deserve it! =P
It was so awesome to read your poems again... so smooth, so heart felt! One of your bests!! Despite my knocking of your poem, I truly did enjoy reading it! You should write some more - but nothing too happy ok?? I'm still heart broken! ;) x0x0x0 |
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