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HE SIGHS
Contributed by
emystar
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Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 03:03:27 PM in AEST
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He's so charming, mezmerizing
He's so cool, patient, kind
Somthin 'bout his dreamy writes
Jus drives me outta my flimin mind.
He sighs, I moan as luv flows
Dream of his arms 'round me
He sighs, I moan as luv flows
Please save yo luvin for me.
If it's luv don't change channels
Thought of luvin you so strong.
Must be much like heaven
Your word touched me a long.
Oh tell me more, my prince
Come be my body guard
Chase the buggers to run
Let's go play in the yard.
Oh Tony
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emystar
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2007-11-12 15:03:27]
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 03:24:21 PM AEST
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wow Emy awsome sing only you could pull off.
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 04:38:16 AM AEST
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wow this is so enlightening and cheerful.. its got a happy melody to it.. awesome job here
rock on,
vampyress jenni |
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by classicfailedhero on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 10:53:33 AM AEST
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| a nice happy write- should be more of this on this site |
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 05:21:59 PM AEST
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Beatiful poem emy very uplifting lyrics great as always my friend take care . . .
((((emystar))))
Ben
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by gribbs on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 02:06:51 AM AEST
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| love it...reminds me of an ancient gaelic frolicking love song... |
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 11:37:51 AM AEST
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| This is a wonderful poem. Keep up the good work! |
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by zenith66 on
Saturday, 24th November 2007 @ 01:21:00 PM AEST
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this is a lovley piece, well written and it kept me readig till the end, brillo!!!
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 27th November 2007 @ 11:18:40 PM AEST
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You are making this look all too easy, putting us all to shame.
Nice work again
Steve |
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by ravensofthedark on
Monday, 10th December 2007 @ 03:59:25 PM AEST
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Something just sparks when i read this, very nice work... as depressing as my poems can seem, i like this one a lot, keep on writing
~The Raven |
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 17th December 2007 @ 10:43:53 PM AEST
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Great write.
You managed to draw the reader into your world.
Well done Emy!!
Keep writing...
~~Oceandreamer~~ |
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by kaycas on
Wednesday, 9th January 2008 @ 03:29:21 AM AEST
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This is good reading,, it makes me want to sing it (though I have a lousy voice) it just flows well enough to be a song. Nicely done.
Congrats!! |
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 14th February 2008 @ 08:08:43 PM AEST
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i dident feel anything wile i read it.
keep up the good work |
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Re: HE SIGHS
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by unknown_utopia on
Friday, 15th February 2008 @ 12:34:17 PM AEST
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| YOU ARE THE BEST YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!! |
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