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#4
Contributed by
Apartment213
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Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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this old walkways tired
seen some things full of holes
he's seen u and knows it's alright
saw u stream right in
this old walkways tired
rittled and screams for you
just one more trip im telling you
just drift on through
this old walkways tired
sentiments broken we all know
cringe with his name
here he comes so how come
this old walkways tired
lets take a breathe
come one lets try again
im not standing in the cold anymore
this old walkways tired and u know
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2003-03-06 17:40:00]
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Re: #4
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 11:37:37 PM AEST
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| wonderful write, welcome to the site:) your writing friend always nessa |
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Re: #4
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 01:49:23 AM AEST
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Dear 213, A good one! Shows poetic talent.
I didn't write a poem until nearly 32,.... and... I'm long past that! Keep writing and praying. The Lord has something for you to do.
Great Grandma Bizzy |
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Re: #4
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:45:01 AM AEST
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beautiful...as always, just so simple and full of emotion....raw talent...kenny, keep it up...if when you get the girl and you arent inspired anymore....write for me
Lindsey |
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Re: #4
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:19:00 AM AEST
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| i'm glad you joined this site. you're poetry is a great addition to it. |
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