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August Leaves
Contributed by
Apartment213
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Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
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August is gone we're trippin' on dead leaves
I've screamed enough for you cried enough not to care
Running out running on knowing it's not very far
Love the poison at the bottom knowing empty bottles
August is gone trippin' on anything everything
Think i can fix this battle tested chest
Think i owe the right to show my mind
Hearing he' s got u in his arms
Knowing ur gone knowing whats not going on
Just get new kicks better friends, move on
Now u know im not that guy
So i'll sit in this room and know you
August is gone trippin' on anything everything
Think i can fix this battle tested chest
Think i owe the right to show my mind
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Apartment213
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Re: August Leaves
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 11:03:04 PM AEST
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Well done on this,very good! Welcome!
Hope to read more! Christina |
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Re: August Leaves
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by Apartment213 on
Friday, 7th March 2003 @ 01:04:04 AM AEST
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| thanx for reading and replying i just found this site and thought hey maybe i could express myself i've only been writing poerty for a short time so it might seem a little immature at times!! |
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Re: August Leaves
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by Bizzy on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 01:57:40 AM AEST
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Dear 213, Welcome to the site. I've only been here about 2 months. Writing is great therapy and you will find many supportive friends here.
Don't you be trippin'! Being young can be difficult. I wouldn't want to go there again.
Great-grandma Bizzy |
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Re: August Leaves
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by LadyDama on
Monday, 10th March 2003 @ 03:43:24 AM AEST
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| i like your style... another one i can hear in a song... blessings... |
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Re: August Leaves
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 02:51:41 AM AEST
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kenny, she's lucky to have the affection of a guy like you...i hope she figures that out....soon!!!!! i would DIE to even justhave an aquaintance that was so thoughtful...
Thank you for sharing
Lindsey |
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Re: August Leaves
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by AngryPrincess on
Tuesday, 18th March 2003 @ 03:04:08 AM AEST
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kenny, she's lucky to have the affection of a guy like you...i hope she figures that out....soon!!!!! i would DIE to even justhave an aquaintance that was so thoughtful...
Thank you for sharing
Lindsey |
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Re: August Leaves
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 19th March 2003 @ 03:23:54 AM AEST
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| you always have the right to show your mind! hopefully this road trip shed some light on your feelings. |
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