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Loves Ghost
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Saturday, 10th November 2007 @ 06:03:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I sleep with your ghost
it's thrilling and it's chilling
ever since
our love brokedown
and you
no longer come around,
I know I should move on
but it is so hard
to let love go
even though I know
you don't want me no more.
I watch as your ghost
slowly
flows across the room...
I kiss your lips
you softly sigh
your eyes start to glow
and you lovingly moan.
Without you nothing matters
there is no one
who could replace you
and The things we use to do
I do with someone new
but it's
just not the same,
Something is always lurking in the shadows
whispering
moaning to me
telling me love is
not lost
seems like I can't let it go.
I don't want another
there is no one
who could replace you...
I am in love with your ghost
every night
you come to me
and it scares me cause it feels so real
oh I
I am really missing you,
I know
I know I should let it go
but
it's so wild
to see visions of you
so slowly
groove into view.
Copyright ©
unknown_utopia
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2007-11-10 18:03:34]
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Re: Loves Ghost
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by law_glen18 on
Saturday, 10th November 2007 @ 06:37:53 PM AEST
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This is a truly amazing and heartfelt poem. If it poses any question , time is the only answer. Keep writing like this and in time it'll all become clearer. Besides, writing is good for tho soul anyway right?...
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Re: Loves Ghost
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th November 2007 @ 05:23:05 AM AEST
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| This is a nice poem. Good job! |
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Re: Loves Ghost
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by emystar on
Friday, 7th December 2007 @ 06:36:40 PM AEST
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wow, I missed this one for sure.
Now you are mezmerize me with this one.
Ya got me luv trippen with vision of my own.
who knows, we might collide someday.
Beautifull work and visions.
Luv ya, huggs,
emy |
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