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my portrait
Contributed by
catz77
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Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 06:52:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Write me a thousand words
Of what you see
Of what you are
What is real and what is not
Write of how you feel
How you look
Paint me a picture
What I see are white walls
Papers scattered everywhere
I’m in a small room
Surprised I haven’t suffocated
I am real
All else doesn’t matter
For all I care it’s fake
I feel helpless and small
Yet I smile so broadly
On this tiny bed
My eyes are red
And my hair long and frizzy
A night like this is perfect
For a soul to get lost in
So my soul wonders on
As I lie empty on my bed
Keep this portrait
I wrote it for you…
Copyright ©
catz77
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2007-11-09 06:52:01]
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Re: my portrait
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 11:15:16 AM AEST
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Quite real one almost forget's there reading a poem and actualy see's the image, a small
room, i like that description, nicely expressed
in a narritive style . . .
thank you also for your read and comment . . .
Ben
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Re: my portrait
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 03:05:56 PM AEST
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| Excellent and well painted. |
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