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Little Bluebird
Contributed by
honey56
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Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 04:38:25 AM in AEST
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Perched upon my windowsill
Singin” a early morning melody
I heard you sang a beautiful song
Come home, come home,
I thought the little bluebird
Was an angel sent from heaven
As he perched upon my window
Sill singin”
With a voice sounds as if it was
Sent from heaven..
The little bluebird finished his
Beautiful Serenade..
With a heavenly chirp, chirp,
Chirp..
He glowed of a bright light
And spreads his wings and
Into the heavens he flew.
Copyright ©
honey56
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2007-11-09 04:38:25]
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Re: Little Bluebird
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by yackerz85 on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 11:05:51 AM AEST
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This is a very lovely and articulate poem about the sweet cheerful demeanor and lovely singing of the blue bird. It is astounding, I think, how we so often overlook such simple but beautiful things like songs the birds sing. I think you captured perfectly the beauty that we unfortunately miss by placing this experience in such expressive terms.
~Mark~
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Re: Little Bluebird
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by MelodiousCorruption on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 01:14:22 PM AEST
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oh my. that was beautiful insight into something so simply percieved as meaningless. if only more people would apreciate simplicity for something amazing.
a lovely poem indeed. |
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