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Mother Nature's Touch
Contributed by
gribbs
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Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 02:32:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Stillness of trees, bushes and grass
Sunshine envelops, landscapes past
Breathing shallow, left in a daze
Wondering why, my mind, I gaze
Feelings of loneliness creep in my heart
Hurting my mind, the regions I chart
Shallow on surface, but deep in my sole
Despair and loathing, pays my minds toll
Wishing for balance to come to me now
Hoping that somehow, that last curtain bow
Will finally come and I'll be off
Where wandering eyes have no one to scoff
Keith William Saunders
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gribbs
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2007-11-09 02:32:24]
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Re: Mother Nature's Touch
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 06:06:33 PM AEST
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Welcome to our global family at ypdc.
Incredible writing here.
huggs, smiles,
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Re: Mother Nature's Touch
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by tifrob on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 08:52:17 PM AEST
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I liked this poem, simplicity and despair seem to walk hand in hand. Wishing for balance (good luck there). It's seems to be non exesistant in the world I know.
Truly a good poem,
~Me~ |
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