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AFTER THE SOUND
Contributed by
accurate
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Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 01:25:08 AM in AEST
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AS THE SOUND WENT
I LOOKED BY MY SIDE
LOOKING AT SIDES BENTH
I KNEW I WAS BEHIND
SO I LEAPED TO TV
ONLY TO SEE WAR
I WASNT SO BUSY
SO I OPENED THE DOOR
SIRENES STILL SCREAMING
PEOPLE WERE ON SHOCK
THE PRESS INTERVIEWING
THOSE WHO DIDNT HAV LUCK
AFTER MOMENTS OF SILENCE
A NEW LEADER CAME
HE CAME AROUND WIT SIRENES
A NEW ORDER HE SAID IN FAME
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Re: AFTER THE SOUND
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by accurate on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 01:35:00 AM AEST
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Re: AFTER THE SOUND
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by accurate on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 09:29:09 PM AEST
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its a good poem, it sheds mostly on the endtimes of the christain religion
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Re: AFTER THE SOUND
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by accurate on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 10:16:35 PM AEST
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that is true my dear , only a few beliv in it
it is a good poem, i think the church should better hear this
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Re: AFTER THE SOUND
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Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 10:25:54 PM AEST
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| I like this but I dont see where the bible has anything to do with it , the bible is just a book and your poem is more like real life |
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Re: AFTER THE SOUND
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by accurate on
Tuesday, 13th November 2007 @ 10:51:10 PM AEST
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its a great poe, its a very nice one i get the rythm, nice one. but what text shld i read in the bible to find out. oh! i am sorry, i think revelation would do... nice poem
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