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Where is the shadow?
Contributed by
law_glen18
on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 11:40:50 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I walk for awhile
Under the rain
Its beating upon me
But i bare it alone
I long for my glove
That i used to hold
That kept my hand warm
My shadow is gone
I sit on the bus
Riding to my haven
I miss the warm blanket
That enveloped me lovingly
I fall asleep in these sheets
And i still feel the draft
That flowed between them
Held up by the missing shadow
I walk the milestones of life
Facing the difficulties along the way
Heart longing for the shoulder
That held me up high
But i miss the most
The touch of silk
As i linked lips
With my beautiful shadow
"In the strangest places love can be found..."
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law_glen18
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2007-11-08 23:40:50]
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Re: Where is the shadow?
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 01:01:05 AM AEST
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Wow that was quite the melancholy read. You penned this well.
Peace,
Laura |
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Re: Where is the shadow?
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by gribbs on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 02:47:54 AM AEST
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| True in this life sometimes, the ones we love most seem to be with us such a short time...like a shadow on a cloud swept day... |
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Re: Where is the shadow?
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 09:19:48 AM AEST
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a very powerful intense write.. i love the expression in this and especially love the last sentence there.. lovely!!
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Where is the shadow?
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by tifrob on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 08:34:00 PM AEST
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This piece leaves a saddness. Not for just the poet but for the reader.
"With my beautiful shadow", beauty and shadow, paints a picture. A picture that is priceless. I like this concept that your shadow is your friend, not your foe.
A wonderful poem,
~Me~ |
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Re: Where is the shadow?
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by law_glen18 on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 09:50:04 PM AEST
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| Thank you all for your comments it is a valuable gift, true inspiration. I wish you all the best! |
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