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while taking a leak today
Contributed by
JohnYamrus
on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 06:38:39 AM in AEST
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while taking a leak today
that last drop
(the one that
usually ends up
on your pants)
shook off
onto my hand.
and it struck me
as pure and clear
as a line
from the Diamond Sutra
that no matter
how hard
we try to negate
or deny
our humanity…
we can never
really
shake it.
Copyright ©
JohnYamrus
... [
2007-11-08 06:38:39]
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Re: while taking a leak today
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 07:19:00 AM AEST
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*smiling and nodding head* Big subject matter written in simplicity. Excellent. I like your style.
Peace,
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Re: while taking a leak today
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by MelodiousCorruption on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 12:23:55 PM AEST
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i literally laughed out loud but then i realized.....it has a meaning most people over look.
definatly lovely work. |
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Re: while taking a leak today
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by shelby on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 02:59:43 PM AEST
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lol nothing like I thought I liked it
Michelle |
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Re: while taking a leak today
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by law_glen18 on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 04:33:30 PM AEST
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| This is such a funny write. I cannot begin to imagine what you were thinking when you wrote it. Really good with a true meaning, i know what thats like. lol, nice one! |
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Re: while taking a leak today
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 4th December 2007 @ 01:02:33 PM AEST
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It's interesting how even the most shallow things and actions can be so much deeper than we think.
Well written.
Take care,
David |
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Re: while taking a leak today
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by little_genna on
Sunday, 6th January 2008 @ 01:41:46 PM AEST
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| i was expecting something funny from the title but i was nicely surprised that it makes you stop and think... really enjoyed reading this. thanks for pointing me towards it. |
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