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A mornings word 110707
Contributed by
wordsy
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Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 11:56:03 PM in AEST
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My loss of faith it haunts me
it's true I once believed
You know that I once had hope
but I feel we've been deceived
I use to wait on answers
and the truths they would reveal
but now I think it was all a lie
or at least that's how I feel
I used to pray every day
but now I wonder why
I wasted time on useless words
as I watch my loved ones die
I use to think that nothing was wrong
that it was all according to plan
Now I don't know what to think
or where it is I stand
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wordsy
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2007-11-07 23:56:03]
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Re: A mornings word 110707
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 12:14:40 AM AEST
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Great piece of poetry...wonderful rhythm and rhyme. I can relate to these words, as I'm sure others do as well.
Peace,
Laura (who finds it easier to go with the flow and just believe....all things happen as they should, for a reason....sometimes it just takes awhile for the reasons to be revealed) |
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Re: A mornings word 110707
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by wizard on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 01:48:16 AM AEST
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i can certainly relate to this as well... what choice do we have but to question such things...
wiz |
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Re: A mornings word 110707
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by gribbs on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 02:13:06 AM AEST
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| great poem of lost faith, which many of us have in this day and age...seeking a higher level of consciousness and belief in ones self is a comfort..."Imagine". |
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