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Moonlit Surrender
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 06:28:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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There’s a certain splendor in the way
Your screams caress the walls of my heart,
An indefinable joy and completeness laced in your
Resonating pleas…
Wrists bound tightly behind your back,
A beautiful, pale indigo already spreading,
Your cheek scraping against the ground
As you run your tongue along the length of my heels in admiration…
~You came to my chamber with pride,
But I promise you will leave on raw, bended knees… ~
You are silent, but dare to look up at me.
My whip bites angrily into your virgin flesh,
A guttural scream tearing itself from your lips,
Bathing me in black flames of yearning-
Oh! what pleasure, your moonlit agony!
Let me break you, flawed perfection,
Punish you with my ruthless hand,
Bleed you with my dagger of cruelty,
Sip every precious, unwilling drop
Of your shattered esteem…
MERCY!
You beg,
Yet still sacrifice your crimson body,
Lean into every wretched flogging,
A melody of moans and cries
Spilling from your weary mouth…
I smile lovingly at your worthlessness,
Lifting your chin with a gloved hand,
Staring into your broken eyes…
Terror and love glimmering down your ruined cheeks,
Sweet stars of pain...
A luscious sigh of surrender.
A gaze wrapped in robes of adoration.
A tremulous whisper-
Forever yours, Mistress…
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FleurdeSang
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2007-11-07 06:28:13]
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Re: Moonlit Surrender
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by doug on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 08:20:04 AM AEST
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Steph.. u r something else.. and I mean that in the best possible way. I've as of late lost all ability to write the dark sensual poems I've always enjoyed but tonight when I try again I'll look to this for inspiration. I love
that dark heart of yours. Your writing is alluring , erotic and dark. I don't know if you like fantasy books but if so read Wizards First Rule. If you do you'll know why I recommend it to ya. lol. Take care , luv ya , truly , doug |
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Re: Moonlit Surrender
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 11:15:51 AM AEST
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Oh Stephy, I think this is the darkest I've ever seen you go. holy heck!!
Kid, sometimes you scare me. lol
You are such a master with the pen. It matters not, the subject. You do
everything so well and justly. Beautiful and disturbing, like your calling
card.
Your talent is limitless, dear one. Relish it .. USE it. It'll take you far! =)
*hugs hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: Moonlit Surrender
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 03:38:03 PM AEST
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Very creative writing.
huggs,
emy |
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