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never the same again
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 11:51:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I'll Never be the same
my heart is always screaming for you in vein
missing parts of you ....
inside of me
I search so endlessly
Drowning in this misery
wish i'd never wake
praying my soul for the reaper to take
crimson covers my sheets
tears only repeat
the sun is setting somewhere else
All I see is black
always ready to attack
this piece of me I seem to lack
all leads back... back to you
the only real love i ever knew
Vampyress Jenni
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Phantomvampyress
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Re: never the same again
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by funnyface09 on
Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 04:43:32 PM AEST
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powerful write..
i hope the friend of yours who is going through this will feel better soon..
thanks for sharing..:) |
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Re: never the same again
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by needledancing on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 01:05:05 AM AEST
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| How utterly lonely for all who lose loves companion....still we go on with hopes to find one at least the same if not grander...the cycle of loving is painful. Comfort to your friend and praise to you for your insight into the darkness it fills the heart with. good job |
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Re: never the same again
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by deadheadpoet on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 09:32:01 AM AEST
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Dark and sad write....it just oozed with loneliness. Good write, Jen.
Peace and hugs,
Laura |
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Re: never the same again
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 11:28:59 AM AEST
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Oh Jenni, how exceptional. Just so damn painful and emotive.
I adore this line ..
the sun is setting somewhere else
I don't know but there is something deeply poetic and sad about that.
Very moving piece, hun. Truly ~
*hugs*
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Re: never the same again
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 11:30:31 AM AEST
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" the sun is setting somewhere else All I see is black " this line is magnificent, i mean it's
just is incredible, you are an artist in a class
by yourself. The freedom in which you display
and the command of your craft, by merely just writting when you feel and what you feel and once it's on the page simply pulverizes me, is nothing short of inate genius, your a writter's writter, who's so damn down to earth, what a poetic breath of fresh air you are . . .
Ben |
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Re: never the same again
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th November 2007 @ 09:32:14 AM AEST
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Doesn't everyone have that special someone,
who cannot be shaken off,even if we try? Or ,do we even want to shake them off.?..No..
Even their name sounds like pleasure,doesn't it? But the truth is, we can rarely have them.
You descibe it so well.
Den |
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Re: never the same again
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 17th April 2008 @ 07:16:30 AM AEST
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Oh this is so sad and touching... your pain is felt throughout... Thank you for sharing....
Jenni_K |
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Re: never the same again
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by JohnRhinem on
Saturday, 9th August 2014 @ 05:51:09 PM AEST
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""""* . *""""
! ! ............................Hey Jenni, your beauty must be mentioning about or better alluding unto, `Love's Reaper`.... |
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Re: never the same again
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by JohnRhinem on
Saturday, 9th August 2014 @ 05:51:36 PM AEST
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""""* . *""""
! ! ............................Hey Jenni, your beauty must be mentioning above or better alluding unto, `Love's Reaper`.... |
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