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Falling Further
Contributed by
MelodiousCorruption
on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 08:52:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Unrealized it is,
the mood in which
her life operates near daily.
She falls further.
Unnoticed it is,
how her smile drops
everytime you turn around.
She falls further.
Unrecognized it is,
the girl standing
and waiting alone.
She falls further.
Unloved it is,
the feeling residing
in the girl without reason.
She falls further.
Unsaid it is,
and uncommented on
is the declining will.
She falls further.
Unacceptabe it is,
to realize who she is,
the girl I see in the mirror.
I fall further.
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MelodiousCorruption
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2007-11-05 08:52:12]
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Re: Falling Further
(User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 07:37:16 PM AEST
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You are a very creative writer.
Awesome.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Falling Further
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by wizard on
Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 08:26:26 AM AEST
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very nicely done!!
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