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Dreamers Mountain ridge
Contributed by
zenith66
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Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 12:05:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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At the edge of sea and land,
On this vertex where I stand,
Where the widening sea collides against the sky,
While the dreamlike distance inundates the eye,
Dark fingers of jagged light descend,
From the heavens which they rend,
Through the ages and the storm,
Briefly lighting cloudy forms,
And at the ceiling of the mount,
Where the swirling clouds fragment,
Split for miles by golden light,
Stretching ever toward the night
Whose sombre eyes possess a glare,
Wheel through space devoid of air,
Can captivate this earthly crowd,
With all the silence of a cloud..
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2007-11-05 00:05:19]
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Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 04:09:32 AM AEST
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wow. zenith, what a brilliant and beautiful description of the awe
we feel when facing heaven-ward. You have captured the sunset
in its full glory and wonder. Nothing quite has the power to possess
me as does the sea, wind, clouds and sky ... and all that surrounds them.
Truly remarkable and indicative of a master poet. Distinctly
impressive, my friend. Lovely read ..
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Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge
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by emystar on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 07:28:00 PM AEST
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ditto, what she said.Breathe takeng write.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge
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by endlesspath on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 12:02:42 PM AEST
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esquisite, pen. beautifully capturing what a reader wants to see, and feel.
claps
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Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 8th November 2007 @ 11:45:03 PM AEST
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| Really beautiful poem xx |
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Re: Dreamers Mountain ridge
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by lovingcritters on
Wednesday, 14th November 2007 @ 05:13:52 AM AEST
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Dear Zenith,
I loved your descriptions so vivid in my mind....
I could read your poetry all the time!
I love poets with lots of feelings.
Uplifts my heart and sends it reeling!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
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