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This is me
Contributed by
Forgotten_soul
on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 06:58:12 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Wake up and smile,
living a lie
every thing's so great
All of it's so fake
this is who I am
The walls are closing in
make believe or just pretend
and walk away
hold your ground and don't give in
hold your tongue, where to begin
and no one wins
wake up in hell,
Daddy I love you
mommy I hate you
somebody save me
look back and regret
what you've broken
and all you've thrown away
don't no where to pick up
and begin again
this is who I am
The walls are closing in
make believe or just pretend
and walk away
hold your ground and don't give in
hold your tongue, where to begin
and no one wins
living like this
maybe there's something to hold onto
maybe something to lose
living like this you'll never no
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2007-11-04 06:58:12] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: This is me
(User Rating: 1 ) by -Nik-91- on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 09:53:01 AM AEST (User
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i like your poem its good keep writting xxxx |
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Re: This is me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Randyjohnson on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 11:09:19 AM AEST (User
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Great poem |
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Re: This is me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 01:08:46 PM AEST (User
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Great write. Very relate able. |
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Re: This is me
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voice of the Silent on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 05:58:25 PM AEST (User
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Great write. I can relate to this a lot |
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