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Man
Contributed by
tejas9999
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Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 03:42:15 AM in AEST
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A speedy freeway
A blind man
Speeding cars and trucks
He survives
A speedy freeway
A deaf man
Speeding cars and trucks
He survives
A speedy freeway
An innocent child
Speeding cars and trucks
He survives
A speedy freeway
A totally perfect man
Speeding cars and trucks
He gets hit, and dies
- Tejas Thakker
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2007-11-04 03:42:15]
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Re: Man
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by forgotten_poet on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 09:23:29 AM AEST
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| hey this is good |
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Re: Man
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by Honey56 on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 11:14:48 AM AEST
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Excellent write....But sad in a way...
Blessings. |
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Re: Man
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by Randyjohnson on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 11:18:15 AM AEST
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| Great poem |
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Re: Man
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 12:51:15 PM AEST
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| Powerful writing. Wish we knew why things go like they do....Russ |
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