|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
To Live
Contributed by
MelodiousCorruption
on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 12:54:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
|
To feel the sand beneath my back
To feel its warmth that seeps into my soul
To hear the melodious crash of surf
To hear the seagull cries
To see the white caps fall
To see the sun glaring down at my still figure
To taste sweet salt on the wind
To taste my dripping presperation
To smell the tang of the ocean
To smell and take in the peace
To live this life without interuption
To be my only wish is that I leave quietly
To the hypnotizing afterlife I ascend
Copyright ©
MelodiousCorruption
... [
2007-11-04 00:54:20]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: To Live
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 01:36:35 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Very tranquil write. I like how you started each line with "To"...as if each individual thing is so important (which it is), and each line came together well. Thanks for sharing.
Peace
deadheadpoet |
|
|
Re: To Live
(User Rating: 1 )
by silverlining on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 05:47:34 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| life.. everybody should go get one.. love the post. |
|
|
Re: To Live
(User Rating: 1 )
by Randyjohnson on
Sunday, 4th November 2007 @ 11:26:10 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Good poem |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Community
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
