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Ghosts Hidden
Contributed by
exiled
on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 09:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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(Ghosts Hidden)
Darkness sorrounds me,
shrouds everything in my life.
I'm looking for a way
out of this,
but I cannot see the light.
Or maybe i'm just blind,
maybe i'm just blind.
The ghosts of my past
are hidden deep within my eyes.
As I walk through a bed of roses
only to have the thorns
prick at my sides.
The cold blood drips
down my fingers.
For the wounds that I have
for so long denied.
Darkness sorrounds me,
shrouds everything in my life.
I'm looking for a way
out of this,
but I cannot see the light.
Or maybe i'm just blind,
maybe i'm just blind.
Why do I continue to hide myself?
Why cant I just break down
and cry....why?
I feel as if i'm about to die.
As darkness shrouds
everything in my life
how do I kill these
ghosts hidden within my eyes.
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exiled
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2003-03-06 09:30:00]
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Re: Ghosts Hidden
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 09:46:07 AM AEST
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| Good one Everyone has ghosts in their closets I know I do! Christina |
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Re: Ghosts Hidden
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by TypenLutschen on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 10:42:35 AM AEST
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This was really effective, I thought. It's very expressive. I liked the repetition. Very well developed, hope to see the second one soon
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Re: Ghosts Hidden
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by shelby on
Thursday, 6th March 2003 @ 11:59:00 AM AEST
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| I use the its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who your not phrase alot. This was a wonderful poem. |
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Re: Ghosts Hidden
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by Gribba on
Saturday, 8th March 2003 @ 03:53:14 AM AEST
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This was really good... I like the repet part alot. I think it was well structured!
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Re: Ghosts Hidden
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by karoody on
Friday, 21st March 2003 @ 11:40:40 AM AEST
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Very well written. I hope you resolve this issue soon. Hate to see a friend in sadness.
Take care,
Kara |
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