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Cherish
Contributed by
deadheadpoet
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Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 12:53:13 AM in AEST
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Can you feel the beat of my heart, my love
It beats like a drum in a rhythmic flow
Filled with a desire heating up inside me
Moments like these, I feel myself glow
The very thought of ye makes my skin react
Each nerve is on heightened alert
Fine hairs raised all over my body
I'm breathless without any effort
Sing to me songs of freedom
Fill my senses with love and joy
Right the wrongs we have created
Wisdom and compassion, we must deploy
Cherish one another like never before
Realizing how close the end came
Glad I am... to hear your voice
Whence in the night...you call my name
11/1/07
Laura Howell Horner
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2007-11-03 00:53:13]
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Re: Cherish
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by joydeep_nath on
Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 01:18:11 AM AEST
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| hey a well written piece that captures the a marriage that still has love and passion left in it..its passionate and yet subdues like married life..heheh..keep it up!!!(by the way m not married!!!!!!) |
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Re: Cherish
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 04:19:57 AM AEST
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Most encouraging to read. Beautifuly expressed my sister laura . . .
peace and hugs 2u and yours . . .
Your Hippie Brother Ben . . .
bjps |
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Re: Cherish
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by emystar on
Saturday, 3rd November 2007 @ 02:12:14 PM AEST
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Beautifull write, sis. I'm so happy to see you on the upside of things.
Hang tuff.
big huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Cherish
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 03:42:14 AM AEST
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perfect. Just too damn perfect, sis.
I haven't much else to say about this. Just that it is so glorious
to witness a happy heart flowing through your words. :)
Beautiful, as truth generally is.
love, peace and hugs to you, hun
~MG |
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Re: Cherish
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 5th December 2007 @ 09:07:49 AM AEST
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Sweetly written on the essence of what a trle relationship should be like. Well written.
Take care,
David |
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Re: Cherish
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by AnthonyGoodwinJnr on
Wednesday, 16th September 2009 @ 06:20:57 PM AEST
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| It echoes many of my own sentiments, very well constructed by someone who obviously knows and appreciates love. |
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