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dusk
Contributed by
forgotten_poet
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Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 06:17:44 AM in AEST
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the yellow sun descends to kiss the sea
setting the sky alight with its red flame
streaks of orange form the heavens bleed
through the air, limitless and untamed
the wind is blowing, softly whispering
i can hear its echoes amongst the sand
no one there but a child laying, listening
colors run through the lines along his hand
ripples break the reflection of the skies
and leave broken images along the sea
waves settle in the young childs eyes
as he slips ever gently into a dream
take me away to my place of rest
were sun upon the sea now lays
way away to the sunset
yellow lies beneath the blue to end the day
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Re: dusk
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by brew on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 01:13:17 PM AEST
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Dusk is like the setting sun...it relaxes, calms and sets
didnt sound as one was high
sun rises are also cool
they give you so much peace to a new day
beautiful
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Re: dusk
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 17th January 2010 @ 04:08:23 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful.....
I can really see the sunset, and smell the air surrounding it, superb imagery!
You really have set a beautiful scene.
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