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a Promise
Contributed by
corgan06
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Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 04:01:41 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I have told you my own feelings,
And you have told me yours.
I know you fear repetition,
You will not be hurt anymore.
I may not be the perfect guy,
But there is one promise I can keep.
I will not hurt you like he did,
I will never make you weep.
I know that I am not always home,
You won’t stand the distance again.
Never mind the miles between us,
Count our love instead.
I will not leave for someone else,
I will listen to your every word.
There is sunshine in your smile,
And I hate living in the dark.
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corgan06
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2007-11-01 04:01:41]
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Re: a Promise
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by jillian_phan on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 06:59:37 AM AEST
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| i like how it starts.. but somewhere u left me blank.. maybe because i was expecting more.. very good. you made me want more from it |
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Re: a Promise
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by shelby on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 01:38:42 PM AEST
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A beautiful write and truth within these words. She is lucky.
Michelle
I liked there is sunshine in your smile |
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