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FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
Contributed by
emystar
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Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 09:04:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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You make me wonna scream
You so **** mean
She-n-you did the wrong
Busted our fake, fake home.
Listen to your frustrating blibber
Hours on end my ears dribbered
Don't call me no more
Aw no, no, no, dribber, blibber.
Sit in yo own pile of mess
Leave behind simply fo get
U respnonsible fo yo own fall
Fo git this numba, don't call.
Do yo thang now, fo me
From past I've been free
Clean up yo own crap
Want take no mo yo flap.
Take yo preverted memories
Shove um high, I'm free
Compassion means no to you
***** ole man, I'm thru.
Don't ask!
Copyright ©
emystar
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2007-10-31 21:04:07]
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Re: FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 03:29:40 AM AEST
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Sounds like a healthy experienc of telling someone off. I assume you weren't trying to be funny, but I couldn't help but smile to myself while reading this poim.
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Re: FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 03:40:01 AM AEST
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I guess I lost my comments, so I 'll try again. I really enuoyed this write. I didn't assume you were trying to be funny, but it seemed you were really enjoying telling this person off ......anyway I was. :)
Thanks for sharing
Will
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Re: FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
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by Honey56 on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 04:01:18 AM AEST
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| I do agree with willofree..And yes it made me laught..But a very nice write.. |
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Re: FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 11:20:22 AM AEST
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| way to release that silent scream |
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Re: FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
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by needledancing on
Friday, 2nd November 2007 @ 12:27:58 PM AEST
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It is an artful style indeed which does have a new and interesting effect. Definately venting out that anger....and I promise...I won't ask.
Enjoyed the whole effect. |
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Re: FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 05:14:55 AM AEST
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| great poem! i really liked the tone in this poem. excellent work!! |
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Re: FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 10:08:02 PM AEST
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| I love this I know someone who I would love to say all that to lol. xxx |
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Re: FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th November 2007 @ 03:40:03 AM AEST
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Wow! i'm glad i'm not on the receiving end of that. This poem certainly reveals some surly
emotions, hope u r ok great write as always.
Telling like it is . . .
((((emystar))))
Ben
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Re: FRUSTRATING BLIBBER!
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by starry_night on
Thursday, 13th December 2007 @ 08:21:12 PM AEST
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| Love your venting here, Emy, can relate so well to my own experiences ... you sure don't mince words and I love your style ... hugs Jan |
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