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Skydiving
Contributed by
whiskybear
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Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 05:04:04 PM in AEST
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I wanted my first time to be with you
I have so much trust in you
I know you wouldn't hurt me
You would be right there
Telling me everything is fine
As your holding my hand
With that beautiful smile
As the door opens you
Would look at me
And say there's no turning back now
1...2...3... JUMP!
I'll Never get to see that day
You left this world to early
I just wish I could Jump with you
I know Skydiving isn't going to be the same
You aren't going to be here to teach me
But when I do jump
I know You'll be there
With that smile I love so much
Copyright ©
whiskybear
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2007-10-31 17:04:04]
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Re: Skydiving
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by law_glen18 on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 06:02:01 PM AEST
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Absolutely heart gripping stuff. I really liked it
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Re: Skydiving
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 09:15:15 AM AEST
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beautiful, and sad.
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