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cancer
Contributed by
MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 01:38:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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THUNDER BOOMS AS THE LIGHTNING STRIKES DEEP WITHIN MY HEAD
PUDDLES AND POOLS FILL MY EYES WITH TEARS AND DREAD
MY BLOOD GUSHES LIKE A POWERFULL RIVER ON A RAMPAGE FOR ALL THAT HAVE TAKEN ADVANTAGE OF me
CANCER STRIKES ME ONCE AGAIN AS ALL LIFE SEEMED TO BE CLEAR NOW SWEET THOUGHTS TURN TO VIOLENCE
WHY ME ,WHAT DID I EVER DO TO DESERVE THIS
I HAVE MY WHOLE LIFE AHEAD OF ME ,NOTHING I WANT TO MISS
HOW LONG DO I HAVE BEFORE I HAVE TO WALK THE DEVILS WALK ,DANCING MERRILY TO THE SOUND OF MY OWN DEATH
I LAY IN MY DEATH BED JUST WAITTING ,WISHING ,HOPING THAT TODAY I WILL TAKE MY LAST BREATH
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MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE
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2007-10-31 13:38:18]
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Re: cancer
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 1st November 2007 @ 11:25:12 AM AEST
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I really like this
Excellent |
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Re: cancer
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by soulsearching43 on
Monday, 5th November 2007 @ 04:41:52 AM AEST
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| i hope this is written in the third party i would miss all your words of wisdom if not you better fight i know you well enough from your poetic words to know your strong enough to beat this luv dawn (aka) soulsearching |
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Re: cancer
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by hostile_waffle on
Tuesday, 15th April 2008 @ 08:37:59 AM AEST
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This is good.
Actually, wonderful. |
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Re: cancer
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by redsleeve on
Saturday, 13th September 2008 @ 09:20:40 AM AEST
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great write, extremely emotive.
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