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Sanctuary
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 12:48:53 AM in AEST
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Sun breaks through the thin veil of cotton wool clouds, dapples the lawn where I sit
Tranquillity plays the tune, melody wraps around me, contents me like a kiss
Velvet flowers dance on the lightest of breeze, hypnotically they sway
Seduction to the bees that hum, visiting each in turn
White pillows of angels dissolve into the sky, separate like tissue paper into the blue
Green carpet takes a lighter shade, bathed by a sea of gold
Aeroplanes draw criss cross pencil lines across the heavens
As swallows in the summer haze plummet and rise
Troubles subside in this haven of colours and birdsong
Mother Nature has filled my cup, of her spirit I gladly sip
The aroma of her sweet perfume sedates all thoughts of bitterness
Asleep the mind of angered life, awake the mind of calm
Afternoon rolls silently as shadows stretch and grow
Butterfly alights on folding flower, its message to journey home
For a while I sit and ponder, till the chill of night pervades
My sanctuary has renewed me, its beauty makes me whole
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Re: Sanctuary
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 11:47:17 AM AEST
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Aah friend,
You are definently a man after my own heart.
such a beautifull sceene that you have made that can calm the devil himself. Thanks, I needed that today.
Most folks never ever stop to see mother nature un till she gets violent.
Awesome work from your magical pen.
big huggs, mucho smiles,
emy |
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Re: Sanctuary
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by gribbs on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 02:07:48 AM AEST
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| reminds my of a summers day in my childhood, lying on my back in a medow, away from everyone, consoling myself. |
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Re: Sanctuary
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 7th November 2007 @ 12:27:09 PM AEST
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Beautifully portrayed..Capturing the beauty of nature, and putting it into words is no easy task, considering its complexity and spendor, but you wrote a chef-d'oeuvre. Fantastic!
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