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Smiles and Cries
Contributed by
Retrebult27
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Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 09:59:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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It's really hard to smile,
While trying not to cry.
Living life without you,
I might as well die.
Everything doesn't seem worth it,
I lost willingness to try.
I've filled my day with nonsense,
Just trying to get by.
But all effort has been useless,
all blown away with a sigh.
Now what can I do without you,
all I've done was let time fly.
All I can do now is try and smile,
While I sit in a corner and cry...
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Retrebult27
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2007-10-29 21:59:05]
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Re: Smiles and Cries
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by jenniferstein2006 on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 10:19:16 PM AEST
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Re: Smiles and Cries
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 07:53:14 AM AEST
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this is very powerful and touching.. reading it makes me want to cry now.. beautiful in expression.. I really enjoyed this poem alot.
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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