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Bubbles of confessions held in too long

Contributed by whatsername on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 02:31:43 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

As i sit here in silence
Visions float through my mind
Of my former exultant life
And how the past was never kind

I used to feel vibrent
Love enduced and alive
But now I'm meek and torn
Emotions spilling from my exposed insides

Once a person
with hopes, dreams, and care
Now just a shadow
Broken and unaware

When you broke my heart
Did you think it would not hurt?
That I would not die inside?
And leave my feelings more alert?

Did you ever care
Or even feel my compassion?
I loved you more than air
With a listful burning passion

I gave you the moon
Laced on a bed of stars
You took me to far reaching space
And kissed me while on Mars

But our lives were just to great
And nothing true and pure remains
And the scars seared on my flesh
Symbolize how your hate keeps me in chains

Forever devoted
To your lustful mind
Cut down on my knees
Trapped in cold times

What does she have
That i do not possess?
More love or more time
Or better looks my face can not express?

Was I not perfect enough
In attitude and grace?
Or is it because
She has a fairer face?

I will never love another
Because I will always lack trust
And I hold my feelings in
Until I feel as if I could combust

Is her fallen kiss
more devoted than mine?
Does her soft caressing touch
Provoke the same shivers up your spine?

Why should you be showered
In anothers love?
when I suffer here alone
Never to find happiness from above

Did I deserve your hate?
Or the physical pain?
Emotional searing was all
There was for me to gain

Thank you for the death
I gladly wished on myself
I painlessly ripped out my heart
And placed it on the shelf

No more tears will I waste
Because I just ran out
Now lavishing in inner greif
Full of hate, resentment, and doubt.

Copyright © whatsername ... [ 2007-10-29 14:31:43]
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Re: Bubbles of confessions held in too long (User Rating: 1 )
by law_glen18 on Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 07:09:41 PM AEST
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Inspirational! Really made me think about where i am now, lonely, alone, makes me want to make a change! Love your poem!

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