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secrets
Contributed by
enfield
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Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 11:54:47 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I値l hold your head
I値l let you weep
I feel your shoulder shudder
A pain you hold so deep
Share your secrets with me
I値l lock the truth in my heart
Lay the key in my soul
Hold your cares in my hand
And I値l never let them go
Let the pain out
Don稚 hold the secrets any longer
Whisper in my ear
It will only make you stronger.
Stretch out your hand
Uncurl your finger and take the key
Pouring out your soul
Will only set you free
You whisper in my ear
Unleash the secrets of your life
With another shoulder to carry the burden
It wont be so sharp a knife
So wrap your arms around me
I値l run my fingers through your hair
The burdens so much easier
When you care enough to share
Now bathe in the silence
Basque in the feeling
No secrets between us anymore
Only the sound of two hearts beating
Copyright ﾂｩ
enfield
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2007-10-29 11:54:47]
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Re: secrets
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by Silent-No-More on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 12:22:17 PM AEST
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Very sweet... quite touching, really. It's a wonderful sentiment. It should be that. There is a strength in "we two" that makes everything bearable.
I'm sure this must have meant much to the intended. Nicely done.
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Re: secrets
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 12:35:35 PM AEST
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Wwwwwooooooo Very powerfull, healin, masterpeice.
Don't know who this is for but it touches deep into the soul.
Supercalafradualisticexpialadoshus.
huggs, heart smiles,
emy |
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Re: secrets
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by emystar on
Monday, 29th October 2007 @ 12:35:38 PM AEST
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Wwwwwooooooo Very powerfull, healin, masterpeice.
Don't know who this is for but it touches deep into the soul.
Supercalafradualisticexpialadoshus.
huggs, heart smiles,
emy |
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Re: secrets
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 30th October 2007 @ 07:57:08 AM AEST
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a very touching heartfelt write.. its very uplifting and gives one hope to trust in a friend beautiful job here
rock on,
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: secrets
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st October 2007 @ 06:52:01 PM AEST
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| I really like how you made this poem flow. Very touching. |
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